Comment disposition for OASIS UBL 2.1 PRD4

G. Ken Holman

Crane Softwrights Ltd.

$Date: 2013/06/17 19:35:30 $(UTC)


Table of Contents

1. Overview
2. Non-material public comments
2.1. Namespace and schema questions
3. Non-material committee comments
3.1. Published non-normative citation
4. Non-material TC Administration comments
5. Edits to Public Review Draft 4 for Committee Specification Draft 5

1. Overview

The fourth public review of OASIS UBL 2.1 http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/prd4-UBL-2.1/UBL-2.1.html was announced May 23, 2013: https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/ubl/201305/msg00022.html.

This document details the disposition of comments received both publicly and from within the committee.

2. Non-material public comments

The following non-material public comment was received.

2.1. Namespace and schema questions

Disposition: No action.

3. Non-material committee comments

The following non-material committee comment was received.

3.1. Published non-normative citation

Disposition: modify the citation and add the citation to the list of non-normative references

4. Non-material TC Administration comments

The titles and URI addresses for the latest version of the cited committee notes are incorrect in PRD4:

Universal Business Language Version 2.1 Abstract Syntax Notation 1 (ASN.1) Alternative Representation Committee Note 01.
http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-ASN.1/v1.0/UBL-2.1-ASN.1.html
Universal Business Language Version 2.1 Unified Modeling Language (UML) Alternative Representation Committee Note 01
http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-UML/v1.0/UBL-2.1-UML.html

Disposition: modify the titles and citations as follows per instructions from TC Administration:

UBL 2.1 Abstract Syntax Notation 1 (ASN.1) Alternative Representation Version 1.0
http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-ASN.1/v1.0/UBL-2.1-ASN.1-v1.0.html
UBL 2.1 Unified Modeling Language (UML) Alternative Representation Version 1.0
http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-UML/v1.0/UBL-2.1-UML-v1.0.html

5. Edits to Public Review Draft 4 for Committee Specification Draft 5

Section B.3.5 "Changes from UBL 2.1 PRD3 XML to Final UBL 2.1 XML" is removed as there are no further public reviews.

The following is a summary of the other edits to the specification XML between PRD4 and CSD5:

diff UBL-2.1-prd4.xml UBL-2.1.xml
16,18c16,17
< <!ENTITY stage "prd4">
< <!ENTITY STAGE "PRD4">
< <!ENTITY standard "Committee Specification Draft 4 / Public Review Draft 4">
---
> <!ENTITY stage "csd5">
> <!ENTITY standard "Committee Specification Draft 5">
20c19
< <!ENTITY previous-loc "http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/prd3-UBL-2.1">
---
> <!ENTITY previous-loc "http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/prd4-UBL-2.1">
22c21
< <!ENTITY pubdate "14 May 2013"><!--remove time from pub date-->
---
> <!ENTITY pubdate "19 June 2013"><!--remove time from pub date-->
143c142
<           <emphasis>Universal Business Language Version 2.1 Abstract Syntax Notation 1 (ASN.1) Alternative Representation Committee Note 01.</emphasis>
---
>           <emphasis>UBL 2.1 Abstract Syntax Notation 1 (ASN.1) Alternative Representation Version 1.0.</emphasis>
146,147c145,146
<           url="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-ASN.1/v1.0/UBL-2.1-ASN.1.html"
<               >http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-ASN.1/v1.0/UBL-2.1-ASN.1.html</ulink>.
---
>           url="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-ASN.1/v1.0/UBL-2.1-ASN.1-v1.0.html"
>               >http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-ASN.1/v1.0/UBL-2.1-ASN.1-v1.0.html</ulink>.
152c151
<           <emphasis>Universal Business Language Version 2.1 Unified Modeling Language (UML) Alternative Representation Committee Note 01.</emphasis>
---
>           <emphasis>UBL 2.1 Unified Modeling Language (UML) Alternative Representation Version 1.0.</emphasis>
155,156c154,155
<           url="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-UML/v1.0/UBL-2.1-UML.html"
<               >http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-UML/v1.0/UBL-2.1-UML.html</ulink>.
---
>           url="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-UML/v1.0/UBL-2.1-UML-v1.0.html"
>               >http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-UML/v1.0/UBL-2.1-UML-v1.0.html</ulink>.
1119c1118
<           <citetitle>OASIS Universal Business Language Version 2.1 Abstract Syntax Notation 1 (ASN.1) Alternative Representation Committee Note 01.</citetitle>
---
>           <citetitle>UBL 2.1 Abstract Syntax Notation 1 (ASN.1) Alternative Representation Version 1.0.</citetitle>
1123,1124c1122,1123
<           url="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-ASN.1/v1.0/UBL-2.1-ASN.1.html"
<               >http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-ASN.1/v1.0/UBL-2.1-ASN.1.html</ulink>.
---
>           url="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-ASN.1/v1.0/UBL-2.1-ASN.1-v1.0.html"
>               >http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-ASN.1/v1.0/UBL-2.1-ASN.1-v1.0.html</ulink>.
1129c1128
<           <citetitle>OASIS Universal Business Language Version 2.1 Unified Modeling Language (UML) Alternative Representation Committee Note 01.</citetitle>
---
>           <citetitle>UBL 2.1 Unified Modeling Language (UML) Alternative Representation Version 1.0.</citetitle>
1133,1134c1132,1133
<           url="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-UML/v1.0/UBL-2.1-UML.html"
<               >http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-UML/v1.0/UBL-2.1-UML.html</ulink>.
---
>           url="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-UML/v1.0/UBL-2.1-UML-v1.0.html"
>               >http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/UBL-2.1-UML/v1.0/UBL-2.1-UML-v1.0.html</ulink>.
1143a1143,1153
>         <bibliomixed id="b_XAdES-ISO">
>           <abbrev>XAdES (ISO)</abbrev><citetitle>
>           <ulink
>             url="http://www.iso.org/iso/catalogue_detail?csnumber=56025"
>             >ISO 14533-2:2012
> Processes, data elements and documents in commerce, industry and administration -- 
> Long term signature profiles -- 
> Part 2: Long term signature profiles for XML Advanced Electronic Signatures (XAdES)
>           </ulink></citetitle>
>         </bibliomixed>
>         
17635c17645
<         ISO as ISO/CD 14533-2.</para>
---
>         ISO as ISO 14533-2:2012 <xref linkend="b_XAdES-ISO"/>.</para>